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Saaaaaaad Poem

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Don't you hate it,
When a friend,
Acts like crap,
Tries to pretend,
They never knew you,
They don't care,
And you feel,
That isn't fair,
Cause all you wanted,
Was to be you,
But that wasn't good,
Enough for those few,
You took a step,
That shouldn't be taken,
And you know,
You were mistaken,
What they thought,
And what they did,
Weren't important,
For any kid,
You were so young,
So very kind,
But it seems,
They didn't mind,
If you suffered,
If you cried,
Even if,
You really tried,
To take your life,
To end it all,
Even though,
You were so small.
...i'm in an odd mood today ¬_¬ i dunno what made me write this and i dunno where most of it some from, but i know it's a really sad poem.....it isn't really finished but i kinda went blank after a while and just couldn't think....i did it differently at first but accidentally closed the thing i was writing it in and had to start over.....if you have any questions about go ahead and ask ^^ -this was written a few months ago so meh...-
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Aeterus's avatar
thank you for this